Tuesday, 13 March 2012
What makes a good pitch.
Good Pitch.
WWW (what went well) : (In the video at 00:00-01:44).
What went well in this video is that the people made really good eye contact and that they made their voices really clear so that the audience could understand them well and because they made eye contact and had a clear voice then the audience could listen to what they are saying and enjoy their pitch because they made eye contact and had a clear voice.
Good Pitch.
EBI (even better if): (In this video at 00:00-01:44).
Even better if with the same pitch if they had better body language rather then just sitting down through the whole pitch they could of stood up so that way their pitch could be more fun to watch for the audience watching.
Bad Pitch.
EBI: (In the video at 01:44-06:01).
Even better if for this pitch could be if they would of been more clearer with their voice so that way the audience would enjoy the pitch better, because the people showing the pitch talked fast and you could not really understand what they was saying.
Bad Pitch.
WWW: ( In the video at 01:44-06:01).
What went well for this pitch is that they made good eye contact this was good because the audience was more instersted in their pitch also they had good body language this made them look comfutable and more instsesting.
Tuesday, 28 February 2012
Thursday, 23 February 2012
Three WWW's and EBI's on my pitch
Three WWW's ,( What went well).
- WWW: I explained a lot about my pitch to the audience.
- WWW: The powerpoint of my pitch was bright and eye catching for the audience
- WWW: I summed up every side of my powerpoint so that way I was not just reading what was on the powerpoint.
Three EBI's, ( Even better if).
- EBI: If I could of made eye contact with the audience.
- EBI: It would of been better if I had better body language.
- EBI: It would of been better if I had a clearer voice, so that way the audience can understand my pitch better.
Thursday, 9 February 2012
Friday, 3 February 2012
Tuesday, 31 January 2012
Planning my magazine.
My magazine.
Paw Print.



Thursday, 5 January 2012
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