Presentation of research.

Presentation of my planning.

Presentation of My Planning by Clare O'Mara by 11btec

Task 9 - Final Pitch

Reviewing my work

This is my final pitch for my magazine. After I got some feedback from my peers about my first pitch, I tried to make improvements on my second by improving my body language and making better eye contact and explaining ideas.

I think I got the message about my magazine target audience across by justing showing my magazine fount cover, contest page and double page spread and by talking about my magazine.

The unique thing about my magazine concept is there are not many magazines about cats and that my magazine is aimed at teenagers . It would stand out from other similar magazines by having facts and interesting knowledge inside my magazine.

I felt very impressed with my self after presenting my second. Two particular things I felt pleased about were I knew what to say if I was asked a question about my magazine and I did not lose my focus. Two things I think I could probably change next time would be to speak more clearly so that way the audience can understand me better and to be more confident.

What makes a good pitch.

Good Pitch.
WWW (what went well) : (In the video at 00:00-01:44).
What went well in this video is that the people made really good eye contact and that they made their voices really clear so that the audience could understand them well and because they made eye contact and had a clear voice then the audience could listen to what they are saying and enjoy their pitch because they made eye contact and had a clear voice.


Good Pitch.
EBI (even better if): (In this video at 00:00-01:44).
Even better if with the same pitch if they had better body language rather then just sitting down through the whole pitch they could of stood up so that way their pitch could be more fun to watch for the audience watching.






Bad Pitch.
EBI: (In the video at 01:44-06:01).
Even better if for this pitch could be if they would of been more clearer with their voice so that way the audience would enjoy the pitch better, because the people showing the pitch talked fast and you could not really understand what they was saying.


Bad Pitch.
WWW: ( In the video at 01:44-06:01).
What went well for this pitch is that they made good eye contact this was good because the audience was more instersted in their pitch also they had good body language this made them look comfutable and more instsesting.

Three WWW's and EBI's on my pitch

Three WWW's ,( What went well).

- WWW: I explained a lot about my pitch to the audience.

- WWW: The powerpoint of my pitch was bright and eye catching for the audience

- WWW: I summed up every side of my powerpoint so that way I was not just reading what was on the powerpoint.

Three EBI's, ( Even better if).

- EBI: If I could of made eye contact with the audience.

- EBI: It would of been better if I had better body language.

- EBI: It would of been better if I had a clearer voice, so that way the audience can understand my pitch better.