Task 9 - Final Pitch

Reviewing my work

This is my final pitch for my magazine. After I got some feedback from my peers about my first pitch, I tried to make improvements on my second by improving my body language and making better eye contact and explaining ideas.

I think I got the message about my magazine target audience across by justing showing my magazine fount cover, contest page and double page spread and by talking about my magazine.

The unique thing about my magazine concept is there are not many magazines about cats and that my magazine is aimed at teenagers . It would stand out from other similar magazines by having facts and interesting knowledge inside my magazine.

I felt very impressed with my self after presenting my second. Two particular things I felt pleased about were I knew what to say if I was asked a question about my magazine and I did not lose my focus. Two things I think I could probably change next time would be to speak more clearly so that way the audience can understand me better and to be more confident.

WWW and EBI for my pitch.

                                                     WWW and EBI for my pitch.






WWW : (What went well).


-WWW: My magazine is very creative and I spent a lot of time on the magazine.

-WWW: I knew my magazine very well so i knew what to say.

-WWW: I answered very question that I was asked about my magazine.


EBI : (Even better if).

-EBI: I should make more eye contact.

-EBI: I should speak more clearly so that the audience understand what I am saying.

- EBI: Also I should have better body language so that my pitch is better.

This is one of the WWW and EBI sheets: 

  

This WWW and EBI sheet shows all kinds of ways I could make my pitch better and this sheets also tells me what I did not do well in my pitch. So therefore if I was to do another pitch this sheet would be to help me and to tell me what I need focus on.

This is the second WWW and EBI sheet:

 

This sheet tells me what went well and would be even better if in my pitch. Also this sheet is to tell me what I could do for my next pitch if I was to make it better.